Wednesday, February 4, 2009

http://www.linkedin.com/in/chrystineuman

3 comments:

  1. Don't forget director of basketball games, producer of the women's show if that's still going on, pilot episode of pet rescue, writer/producer/director of short film, and the Hall Institute...

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  2. And producer/editor of the holiday show!

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  3. this is an EXCELLENT first draft! You may want to break your super sentences that describe your work experience into smaller, more digestible chunks.

    it seems as though you are down playing your leadership and management skills. remember! the people reading your resume do not know you personally, they won't think you are being humble. they will just think you don't have management experience or any leadership skills.

    also - consider explaining what software you use to achieve these successes in your work experience as well. that way, if they don't get to reading your skills section they will already know you know how to use X,Y and Z and then if they do read the skills section, you will be reinforcing rather than introducing.

    you have to sell yourself and your skills! no one else is going to do it for you!!

    its very hard to learn how to write about yourself well, but it gets easier with practice. and this is a very sound foundation.

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